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like a stone


...critique anyone?

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:iconstevie73:
First of all my compliments for this beautiful picture and the way you worked on the contrast, colours etc.
The sense of perspective in this picture is very good. In this case you chose a rock in the foreground, various rocks in between and some hills and a beautiful sky in the background, not to forget the foaming sea that stretches out from front to back. That creates a very good sense of depth in a picture. The lighting is good aswell. Some details can still be seen on the stone in front. However, I do have some suggestions. As you advance in photography you might try to use a longer shutter time. Put your camera on a tripod and try to open your shutter for a second or so. If the light conditions are too harsh, you can use a Neutral Density Grey filter to balance the light, so your photo will not be over exposed. The longer shutter time will result in a very ´soft´ sea and will add a nice soft tone to the complete picture. Sometimes it might also be better not to have the division of land/sea right in the middle. The photographic 'standard' is: 1/3 2/3. So 1/3 land and 2/3 sky, or the other way around. However, that's just a standard! Isn't photography about being original 8-) . In your picture the separation of land/sea doesn't disturb me at all. You've made a very nice photo here! Thanks for sharing this with us!
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:iconthe-name1ess:
Beautiful colours, lovely photo :)
:iconsnupijenta:
Heeeeeelt fantastisk!!
Hvordan klarer du det???

Miriam og jeg var og skulle ta solnedgang-bilder ved en strand igår kveld, men jeg fikk ikke til noe bra... jeg har mista teken helt jeg føler jeg.. men jeg må jo bare komme igang igjen!!

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:iconse1988:
thanks for the kind comment:D

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:iconse1988:
oj tusen takk:D

er sikker på at det kommer tilbake,
i mellomtiden kan du jo herje litt rundt
på dA og finne litt inspirasjon:D

funket for meg ;)


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:iconlilleline:
Kjempefint! Alt fra fargene og komposisjonen og til signaturen er så proft utført! Slår mange av de dyre plakatene i interiørbutikkene=)
:iconse1988:
oj takk:D
mener du det!!? nå ble jeg skikkelig gla :iconimhappyplz:


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:iconlilleline:
He he, mener det! Vær så god! De andre som har :+fav:'et mente nok akkurat det samme - de satte bare ikke ord på det på samme måte=)
:iconpeytonangel:
Kjempefint:)
Who are you waiting for eh? hehe^^

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